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The latter is more grammatically correct. [[User:Darin|Darin]] ([[User talk:Darin|talk]]) 11:51, 10 January 2014 (EST) | The latter is more grammatically correct. [[User:Darin|Darin]] ([[User talk:Darin|talk]]) 11:51, 10 January 2014 (EST) | ||
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| + | == Judicial person creating a natural person == | ||
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| + | I think the following should be added to "Section 4 - Rights": | ||
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| + | :''A judidcial person may not create a natural person."'' | ||
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| + | Add it towards the end of the section, about 7-8 paragraphs from the end of the section. | ||
Revision as of 06:44, 16 January 2014
Language in Citizenship section
It says, "The term of the Office of Citizen shall be for life and no Citizen may be removed from office until demise or abdication."
I think it should say, "The term of the Office of Citizen shall be for life and no Citizen may be removed from that office until demise or abdication."
The change is necessary because the phrase "removal from office" may refer to any office that the Citizen may hold, not just the office of Citizen. Darin (talk) 10:39, 10 January 2014 (EST)
Grammar in Taxes section
It says, "No other tax, shall be imposed or collected by the government of the United States except those specified in this Amendment..."
Better is "No other tax, may be imposed or collected by the government of the United States except those specified in this Amendment..."
The latter is more grammatically correct. Darin (talk) 11:51, 10 January 2014 (EST)
Judicial person creating a natural person
I think the following should be added to "Section 4 - Rights":
- A judidcial person may not create a natural person."
Add it towards the end of the section, about 7-8 paragraphs from the end of the section.
